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You danced with me
on top of that hill,
where the wind broke into pieces
small enough to hold
Inbetween our linked fingers.

But at the same instant,
as that wind was crushed
in the heat of the moment
I noticed that the
Totem Pole
lacing your lips was falling
a fairer pink, and your flesh
Left untouched.

Your past was erased
Of the marks that I laid,
And the moment was insecure,
and Desolate, and I lied
and I promised
with fingers crossed.
And the words died on your
Lips.

The taste of them was
Something like ash
gone damp in the mist

in the f     g
           o
                        
in the fog.


A photo of cracked lips
on a man
dancing alone, on the top of a hill
Where the wind was blowing,
with a Trace of cracked air
and the oxygen thin                                                         the oxygen thin
                                                        with sorrow.
©2006-2009 ~LabelMeLow
:iconlabelmelow:

Author's Comments

28/100

I'd like to thank the little people, emo pie, and my managers. (Lou, I'll see you in court.)

Category? Maybe? dA, make more. I need... Anti-Romantic...? Something. Give me something. Because no man has a true form of romance with a bout of sorrow.

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:icondirty-paint:
I like the mental image I get when I think about a photo of a man dancing alone on the top of the hill with cracked lips. :+fav:

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:iconlabelmelow:
Vixtrola lyrics. From the song End: user.

You make it so hard to breathe. + Emoism + title Sorrow. = (for me) A man dancing alone?

Hm. I really do like this business, :aww:

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:iconlacili:
I know how you feel about the categories for writing.

They're a little vague.

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"SHUT UP AND SMILE!!"
Rest in peace, Alex. I love you for now and for forever.
:iconlabelmelow:
They really are. Even for photography. deviantART needs to wake up.

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:iconlacili:
exactly.

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"SHUT UP AND SMILE!!"
Rest in peace, Alex. I love you for now and for forever.
:iconnieya:
very nice !!

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Let the sunshine in :D
:iconlabelmelow:
Grazie. :)

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:iconandthethruthis:
This is really good. :D
I like it. :aww:
:glomp:

<3 Helsness

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And I think to myself


Can life be any better?
:iconlabelmelow:
A dream kind of made it happen... but music too, so it's the good things combined. :D

:hug:

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